| 2018-10-03 12:16:43 |
the strange craft from mars (edited)
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I think details are relevant, it helps keep a knowledgeable reader engage and wanting more. A little effort by the author makes repeat readers. |
| 2019-01-15 16:10:11 |
"OOOOh, daddy!"
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If you were at Pymatuning, you are close to me, LOL |
| 2019-02-28 18:01:06 |
SECRETS OF LIBERTY MOUNTAIN (Updated+Revised: 97,650 words)
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Please post the next segment as a part 2 or other separate segment, it takes as long to find where the story ended and the next segment begins than to read it, good story. Thanks |
| 2019-03-20 18:51:43 |
CAHILL--Part 4 of 6
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Not to mention punching holes through interior walls for a city block |
| 2019-08-26 14:32:16 |
Artificial Affection
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Good story, keep it going |