| 2013-10-04 03:18:54 |
The Shaman 3
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Just how old is the Shaman? Read The Shaman 4, coming soon. |
| 2014-07-18 17:14:03 |
John & Sara's Experiment
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I really liked this story. I think it was possible. it wasn't really about the sex, it was about the relationship and it made me feel good. |
| 2014-01-15 17:04:49 |
The Pendant 9
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Dear anon: I really appredicate the kind words. I got to admit I write stories that please me, not other people, but appreciation is really nice. I dropped out the two other guys, Mike and Jake because I have not yet seen how they would fit into the story. Since I was starting with the presumptions of the orriginal seris, I just left them were thay put thimeselves, out of the picture. The real problem with the pendant, is that it's value is priceless, and the fewer people who know about it, the lest risk it creates. I am assuming that Mike and Jake were so terrified of it, that they have discounted the experience as a hallusination. If they were ever to become aware of the Pendant's existance, it's pereceived threat to them and it's value, it would be yet another story. I do not plan exactly where a story will go, letting my imagination run wild as I type, but my next set of stories will probably be related to planning a real identity for Janine, |
| 2014-01-15 17:23:22 |
The Pendant 7
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Dear anon: I reread 6 and 7, and 7 was clearly different than 6, being an expansion of the ideas in 6. Perhaps the sex scenes were somewhat similar, but as you can see in 8 and 9, my imagination does allow for different ideas. Just as different women come to orgasm in different ways, Janine and Bobbi respond differently. Most woman will not come with penetration alone, but a given woman tends to come, a lot the same way every time. That only limits creativity in that I like my story to be somewhat like real life. Even though this is a fantasy, I do not like it to reinforce the stereotypes of porn. I very much appreciate your comments and I am interested in why I suddenly got a number of dislikes for chapter 7. It seemed like 1000 people read it with no dislikes, then in the next 100 or so, I got a lot of dislikes, followed by a number of likes to bring it back up. Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? The Shadow do! :) |
| 2014-01-15 17:31:10 |
The Pendant 7
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By the way, if you click on the count of votes, it will show who voted while logged in, and how they voted. It gives me the opportunity to read the stories of those who voted, to see how they think. |