| 2019-04-12 16:12:53 |
Finding a Stripper_(4)
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Please, if you are going to vote a negative, tell me what you didn't like about it or how to improve the story or the delivery. |
| 2019-09-12 09:38:39 |
Finding a Stripper_(3)
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Hi everyone. Thanks for reading. I would really appreciate comments. Especially if you vote negatively. What do you like or not like. |
| 2019-09-13 01:42:12 |
The sailing club 1
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I think you're doing fine. Proofread, proofread, proofread. It's amazing how many times you can read it and make corrections yet still find more. It's a difficult process. Enjoy and please continue. |
| 2019-10-08 00:27:00 |
Finding a Stripper_(3)
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OK, everyone who is voting negatively on this story, please tell me what you don't like about it. It would help with the sequel. |
| 2019-10-08 00:27:22 |
Finding a Stripper_(3)
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OK, everyone who is voting negatively on this story, please tell me what you don't like about it. It would help with the sequel. |