| 2017-08-31 17:19:27 |
Mind over Matter Chapter 3+4
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A great story except, proofread your work! you left words unfinished, you left words out and you used the wrong word quite often. |
| 2017-09-05 19:55:11 |
Trucking with Becky Chapter 1
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Excellent story, it reminds me of my days of driving over the road. I'm definitely waiting for the next part. |
| 2017-09-14 22:18:29 |
The Unspoken Game_(0)
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A great beginning! Please more!! |
| 2017-09-16 19:43:56 |
The Young Wizard--Part 5
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I just found and read all 5 parts. What a story!!! I wish I had the talent you have for writing. |
| 2017-12-03 22:00:01 |
Hypnosis For Women
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What a crock of shit. What were you on when you scribbled this one out? |