| 2010-12-18 17:01:35 |
Ashlynn gets disciplined
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Put some paragraphs in to make it easier to read. I wish you'd be nicer to her. Fuck her, yeah, but don't be so cruel. |
| 2015-01-19 01:38:05 |
Linda's discovery
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Excellent writing. Loved the pic. All pics though my anti virus stopped. Is it safe? |
| 2015-01-19 02:30:14 |
Linda's discovery PART2
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What about the malware comment earlier, Cynthia. I got the same message. Loved your story. You're sick! My favorite kinda girl. haha |
| 2015-01-19 13:42:33 |
Linda's Discovery PART 3
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I really loved the writing and plot. This story is ripe for a partner switch. The boys fall in love with, and eventually marry, the others' mother--still hot tubing and switching. |
| 2015-01-19 14:03:05 |
I Saved It For You_(1)
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Why's this story posted twice? Great story, but I'm surprised at the poor grammar and punctuation--unlike the near-perfect Linda series. |