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Comments from foxylindi
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-10-12 02:37:54 | Welcome Home_(10) | I'm not sure what there was NOT to understand? It was as was stated right at the beginning....a "quicky". What's more it's easy to sense from the way it was written how you tried to "imagine" it happening as you wrote the story. As for the negative comments.....Yes...it is always easy to say a story could have been better written but I would agree with the comments so far in suggesting you captured the readers imagination and transported them into that Bathroom. I enjoyed the story and will look forward to seeing more from you. |
| 2008-11-19 02:56:29 | The Deep of Night | I enjoyed the story. As a mild criticism I found it a little short but it does make a change to read something written from a different perspective. I think your description managed to capture the 'feeling' and allowed the reader to picture themselves in the room watching. Foxylindi |
| 2009-02-28 17:28:08 | The Mirror_(1) | To the person posted directly below, thank you for responding to the first readers comment which I too felt was a little foolish. I did think of responding myself, maybe not quite as strongly as you but enough to point out my reason for NOT tagging this as incest was purely because it is NOT. As for this theme containing an element of betrayal?? Am I to then assume, individuals who conduct affairs outside of their marriage are NOT to be considered as betraying their partners? I daresay I could go on but would prefer to leave it to whoever chooses to read my stories to make up their own minds. |
| 2009-05-10 02:32:36 | I enjoyed this and the few of your stories I have read. You have a relaxed writing style which allows the reader to easily take up and run with their own imagination. Keep up the good work | |
| 2009-05-30 02:51:43 | A young guy. An older woman | Thank you for your comments. It is not that I have stopped writing. I still do, whenever time permits, plus there are also periods when I will write something, only to find I am not happy with the finished result. I have written several of those already and I feel readers deserve better. I think if I am honest, I should use an editor rather than rely on my own, less than professional abilities. |