| 2021-04-06 22:16:29 |
The Essay
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Outstanding story, enjoyed the way she seduced him rather than an adult seducing her. Also, enjoyed the little twist of she not being the writer of the essay! Mrs. Strywriter |
| 2021-04-06 20:47:41 |
A Voice From the Past Part 2
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Help me improve. If you didn't like the story, please take a minute to tell me why you didn't like it. If you did like it, why! Thanks! |
| 2021-04-13 18:31:11 |
Three Rules When Writing Longform Erotica
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Thanks for the insight. You hit on our problem of chronicling the wife's sexcapades. They are all about her and she isn't interested in giving out too much personal information so character development is a little difficult. But at least we have some advise and may be able to still complete the task. |
| 2021-04-25 20:00:28 |
Incest Family Part 1
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Wasn't expecting a rape, sorry just not my cup a tea! Otherwise could have been a good story if she had been willing. |
| 2021-07-09 20:40:05 |
Poor White Trash
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Unfortunately, this story probably rings too true for many. I hope your life growing up was the inspiration for this! |