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Comments from TonyMichaels
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-24 21:17:08 | Rachels little secret 04 | I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me. |
| 2022-09-30 04:43:30 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 03 - Bad Girls Get Punished | Very much appreciated throatHer! I like that aspect of domination/submission as well. I always appreciate your comments. Hope the ongoing chapters continue to entertain. I think my style continues to improve due to the excellent suggestions from other readers like yourself. |
| 2022-09-30 15:10:35 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 02 - Indoctrination (1) | Appreciate the comment and suggestion. I know I can tend to be too verbose. Lol. Since this was their first sexual encounter, I wanted to make sure the reader got his money worth. But totally agree with you that we tend to overblow the sex scenes. You'll have to tell me if I do better in later chapters. I do try to make each scene as individual as possible so you aren't getting the same sex scene retold over and over. |
| 2022-10-05 19:49:44 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 07 - Time for a Gang Bang | Your comment is very much on point throatHER. Another kind reader sent me a PM making a similar comment at about this point in the story. Looking back on these first chapters, I could clearly see the pattern I had fallen into and have since been making corrections to avoid this error later on. So hopefully you will see an improvement as it continues. As always, really appreciate the honest critique and suggestions. |
| 2022-10-17 20:12:41 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 10 - Threesome | Good points from both you. And appreciated as always. Definitely something I will keep in mind with the next story as this one is mostly written. I will be curious to see if you think the characters do develop more as you keep going. I think so, but fresh eyes will tell the truth. I couldn't improve without the thoughtful criticism, so much appreciated. And hearing thoughts from readers helps make all of the effort feel worth it. |