| 2010-12-11 21:52:25 |
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I have to agree with the other commenter--it makes no sense whatsoever. |
| 2011-03-04 23:40:28 |
A little Surprise
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I have several stories on this site and I'm glad to pass along some of what I have learned from experience. First, proofread your work several times. I usually spend 25% writing and 75% editting. Also, after uploading it's a good idea to edit again--to put back the spacing that was lost in the upload. It makes the story much easier and enjoyable to read. Good luck. |
| 2011-03-06 19:49:28 |
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I'm glad this was described as a fantasy. If the bullies ever beat up a principal in real life they'd be in jail in an instant. But, putting that aside, it showed a lot of imagination and was well written. |
| 2011-03-12 10:37:57 |
Batman's Darker Side-1
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Yes indeed-working on part 2 now. This is the most fun I've had since I learned about sex. |
| 2011-03-17 22:53:03 |
Batman's Darker Side - 4
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That's why it's Batman's DARKER Side. But all ends well in part 5--coming soon |