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Comments from naughtydragon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-10 17:43:24 | Naked Day - part 25 - Back to Cali | That chapter was awesome. I like that Tim took the time to give Sandy what she really needed- validation and deep affection. I’m also glad that Tim wasn’t unaffected by it as well. Sometimes you characters feel a little short on emotional connection. This was really well done. |
| 2020-09-10 18:09:01 | Naked Day - part 27 - L.A. Woman | Nice. Liking the disconnect he is suffering. Does a much better job of showing his love for her than the times he tells her. Well done. Emotional connections are getting better. |
| 2020-09-10 21:36:44 | Naked Day - Epilogue 8-9 | Well done. I enjoyed the series. Just finished reading everything from New York through the epilogue in one sitting. The epilogue at times felt a bit like checking off trope boxes. At other times though, it really excelled. Part 7 was awesome, the attention to detail was outstanding, and I really connected with the moment they were having. Part 8 was almost there, I think there just weren’t enough clues to her breaking, it felt very sudden, which robbed it of some of the effect. Part 9 was a good ending for the story, it was appropriate for the pace and tone, but I would have liked a little more emotional punch- maybe a final scene with them cuddling at the end of the day. Please keep writing and posting, I’m really enjoying your work. It’s developing nicely. |
| 2020-09-11 03:52:07 | Dakota’s Surprise: Part 1 – Making Friends | Really?!?! You stopped there?!?!?! AAARRRRGGGHHHH!!!! I can't wait for chapter 2. I like these characters. I like their interaction. Would have liked to have gotten a bit more of a sense of parents. That's always a very important moment in any relationship, even if the couple isn't a couple yet. |
| 2020-09-11 17:39:32 | Teacher's Threat | I loved this story. It was nice to see someone write real world consequences for these types of actions. The characterization of the power dynamic was amazing. |