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Comments from naughtydragon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-16 05:42:44 | Skating Free | that was an amazing job of story telling. You managed the tension level perfectly, each near success being undermined by an increasing level of tension. You are an excellent storyteller. |
| 2020-08-26 18:14:17 | How Traditions Start – Part 16 | I love this chapter. The juxtaposition between Zach's maturity and Lisa's naivete was a joy to read. It also contrasted Zach's concerns nicely against his father's in the previous encounter, since they would have had very different concerns for this young lady they both so obviously love and cherish. Her concern about what the others would think all through the early part of the story also seemed very on point. I think the only place you might have dropped a stitch was the near complete lack of Lisa's reaction to what was going on between Zach and Liz. I really enjoy this story, and it sucks that some assholes are down-voting it. I look forward to future chapters. If you're taking requests for future chapters, after Lisa's encounter with Jack, I would like to see a chapter where Presley talks to Lisa, and possibly makes a pass at her. I could see Presley wanting to show that option to Lisa. I couldn't see Molly doing it, just seems out of character for her. Thanks again. |
| 2020-08-26 18:19:55 | Awkward Anne Chapter 3 (reupload) | I like what you're doing with this story. I particularly like that Anne has very definite opinions about consent and appropriate behavior. Too many female MC's are just "down for whatever" and would just shrug their shoulder's about the little creep's up-skirt shot. I like the fact that she got pissed about it, despite the thrill it gave her. I like that she held her ground, and I like that she seems to be growing in confidence and coming into her own. Keep up the good work, don't let the down-votes get you down. Your characters are solid and the story line is moving along nicely. |
| 2020-08-26 18:30:43 | A Story of the Paper Vow Pt. 2 | I like this story. The siblings seem very sweet. I would like a bit more back story. Has Kaitlyn been wheelchair-bound all of her life, or was it later on that something happened? What is the extent of her disability? When did her brother become responsible for her, and has he always been so loving and protective of her? I just think it would fill in nicely for future chapters as they talk or think about the history of their relationship. |
| 2020-08-26 18:50:30 | The Beach Houses: Megan and Kyle | I like using the house for POV on this, and I hope it continues. I think though, that the story should be pure 3rd person objective though. so the couples should have to talk more, express their feelings more, and perhaps something about the house could become attuned to this and help couples enable that aspect. I also like this as an epilogue to the Megan and Kyle stories, though I do hope there are a couple of more chapters coming down the road. |