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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2018-07-03 22:16:25 | Creating My Hot Wife 3 | In this part: too much divergence from the story line (chasing rabbits). Really took away from the build up of Alex in Part 1. You also said that Part 2 would be from her perspective. Yet, I didn't get that That's actually where the rambling started, and Part 3 just got worse. Lost continuity of events jumping from this to that, ("Let me tell you this first, then I'll go back & pick up where I left off.") I didn't see that happen; just one future incident after another. Part 2 was off a little, Part 3 is way off (for me) |
| 2018-07-03 23:05:26 | Creating My Hot Wife 4 | Yes, " My Lady", you did much better "staying on task" than Jim did in part 3. Your deions of the "interaction" between you & Alex were typically female, rather than the rancid details a man would use to describe such intimate encounters. Jim gave a better detailed deion of Alex's first approach to your breast than you did, and you were there when it happened instead "second hand" after you had told Jim what had happened. Except for that "manly arousing detail" I really enjoyed your perspective. |
| 2018-07-04 00:57:50 | Creating My Hot Wife 5 | Greatly enjoyed your presentation. Much better than Part 3. Even though you jumped around some, my finite mind was able to keep up & follow the story. I expected you to go into more detail concerning the relationship with KK (Kevin & Katy) Maybe next episode. Thanks for your experience. I do believe that thru selective porno, a similar experience can be created rather than going to a swap club or group. I really don't know because my wife is hard set against porn in any form. At 75, it isn't any help to me that I know of. She doesn't want me to try to get an ED pill either. Discouraging to me. |
| 2018-07-04 11:37:22 | Creating My Hot Wife 6_(0) | Truth, again, thank you for sharing your experiences and wealth of knowledge with us. The example of "loosing the kids for a weekend" and just for a couple to relax & enjoy each other with no time restraints or nervous about "getting caught" sounds great. That, with the videos, sounds like a theroputic alternative to club or group sex. One suggestion also is for every married couple to have a "date night" weekly to remind them of the more passionate earlier days of dating without all the presures that marriage, children, house, insurance, & car payments seem to stress out most couples. I'm so glad that you pointed out that clubs, or group swinging will not solve the problems that a downward spiral relationship is experiencing. I think in a previous part you mentioned "core stability", & I agree with you that without that commitment and resilience, few (if any) relations can withstand such stress. |
| 2018-07-05 09:48:35 | Let it Rain – 5 | "Bill", it amazes me how well you continue to produce such high quality scenarios.One or two other authors have captured my attention as well as you have. One, even though his material is excellent, for some reason the stories lack closure (the last chapter is missing).Since the posted dates are like 3009-14, something is amiss. A day or 2 after I posted my disgruntled comments (being specific as to expected interactions of the characters) all my comments were blocked from posting at any location The only things I see that would help improve your s is to paragraph in conversattional dialogue, and proof read for wrong letters or missed letters, i.e. mt for my; or mu; ay for at; of for off. or maybe just 1 letter for a short word i.e. m for my; or a for at. Sometimes I miss what day it is or what time of day (& too many meals missed) but that may be my full attentiveness, nevertheless, that doesn take that much from the overall storyline or continuity,. |