| 2020-11-28 01:35:11 |
My Pretty Little Slaves -- Chaper 3
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I realize that the story was written years ago, but the changes I talked about would make it so much easier to read. I don't know if you have written anything recently, as I would certainly be interested in reading it. |
| 2020-11-28 13:30:35 |
My Pretty Little Slaves -- Chaper 4 Renee's Daughters
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I applaud you for all that you have done with your story, but at the same time, I hope you will take the advice of your supporter and improve on your work. |
| 2020-11-28 15:09:11 |
My Pretty Little Slaves -- Chapter 5 – The Training Continues with Janet's Surprise
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I hope you will continue writing and improve along the way. |
| 2020-11-28 19:17:53 |
My Pretty Little Slaves -- Chapter 6 ? Girls at school, Preparing for the Wedding, and a Special Surprise
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I hope that you still will be putting pen to paper and churn out some more stories. |
| 2020-11-30 15:48:36 |
Dog desire - Chapter 1
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Great start keep on coming |