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Comments from Merc098
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-12-28 08:08:59 | Highacre Dragon Breeders 5 - Damn Lizard | chapter 6? |
| 2015-12-31 02:34:40 | Information | several thoughts come to mind from that statement. whichever one should I use? |
| 2016-01-06 07:34:17 | The Sexcraft Chronicles - Book 1 - Caroline's Quest - Chapter 2 - Alpha | so is there not going to be any more chapters? |
| 2016-01-12 09:25:17 | The Dragon's Treasure, Part I | Part two please! this is a great story concept! |
| 2016-01-14 07:25:30 | The Ravaging In The Forrest | um yeah needs to be rewritten to make more sense. you should slow down on the sex scene so readers can enjoy the tentacle fucking more. also you need to be careful of how you use past and present tenses. so in closing you should do a proof read and get someone to double check your work in case of errors. you did spell fearful like this "Fare full" but yeah good concept. |