| 2018-04-22 08:48:04 |
Knight and Dragon Ch. 2_(0)
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chapter three please!!!! |
| 2014-01-17 07:11:28 |
A Man and His Pets (complete)
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Glad you put a restriction on the comments the other individual stories had way too many idiots posting. missed this story glad to see its back. |
| 2014-12-07 10:34:22 |
Fate's Calling (Chapter 1)
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might take flight. damn my computer lol |
| 2014-12-07 10:33:46 |
Fate's Calling (Chapter 1)
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I must agree with the first comment. While this does show promise you need to brush up on the way people in the medieval times spoke. Now you dont have to go all Shakespearean on us but a little more authentic would be nice. you also seem to have missed a few words and you forgot to have Erida undress for the sex scene. before posting the next chapter re-read your work and do a little editing. I look forward to see how this story might tight flight. |
| 2013-09-16 02:44:56 |
G.E.N.E B.S. 005 (Just an Intro
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This is the first and only warning I will give do not troll my story comments and do NOT Post ads or hook up emails or phone numbers. Its arrogant and rather pathetic. |