| 2017-11-21 16:14:22 |
Kids go to the ravine
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Cute, enjoyable but way too short !!!! |
| 2013-02-17 14:01:54 |
The Beach House_(2)
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Top quality story ! Keep the beach house title and write about the week-ends that follow. Keep up the great work !!!! |
| 2013-02-17 14:52:34 |
Forced Rape
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A very good, beliveable story. Fine details, and interesting people. Keep up the good work !!! |
| 2013-02-18 11:05:45 |
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Top drawer writing. Maybe you could turn this into a monthly series. The forebidden always makes for fine reading. GOOD WORK !! |
| 2013-02-18 12:46:34 |
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This is just great ! DON'T stop now, more chapters please. !!! |