| 2013-02-19 14:21:49 |
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That was way more than great, that was the best I have ever read. Where is chapter two ??? |
| 2013-02-19 14:42:41 |
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Nothing gives more pleasure than sharing. Good writing and a quick read. Five stars !! |
| 2013-02-24 12:02:29 |
FAMILY FUCKING FUN
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Different style for you, interesting but a little foul under the conditions presented to start. Have to think this over since it's completely different from Tony. ??? |
| 2013-02-25 12:37:52 |
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This is very fine writing. You didn't rely on very discusting foul language to make a point. Very mature and well done for an educated readership. I personally don't agree with the common idea of someone under sixteen years being the main sexual subject but it is what it is. Keep going onto more chapters and please don't create and legal problems for "Dad". Good Luck!! |
| 2014-02-24 17:46:46 |
My encounter with a younger man (best sex of my life)
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Fine job of writing and a very good story. Needed a little more of an ending before chapter 2 is written. All in all good work. (countrycadillac) |