| 2019-08-27 12:46:10 |
Earning an Allowance
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Excellent pace, powerful buildup, and an eroric finish! I love the concept of this story. It's one of the nest I've read on the site in quite some time, and I'm a regular reader so thank you for that. I definitely encourage you to continue and let this father-daughter story unfold. |
| 2019-09-10 14:39:24 |
Danni
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Well done, my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed the story, and hope you have other ideas to entertain us with. True, the characters may have been acting a little juvenile, but I think that also comes with the repression they endured. Overall, it's well written, evenly versed and steadily paced. The sibling taboo is just the going on the cake! |
| 2019-09-10 15:22:16 |
DONNA_(1)
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You don't disappoint, Mystic. Again, another great story. I lived how you got both father and uncle involved with her. The actual apprehension is there, thick and palpable, for both of them. The buildup makes for a great story. Here's hoping you'll continue this story! |
| 2019-09-10 18:11:05 |
Unexpected events
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Playful and inventive, this story was a fun, quick delight. I'm glad it caught my eye. Not a lot of development, though I realize there isn't much time in one this quick. Will there be more? I'd love to know how long this infatuation has been building. |
| 2019-09-11 12:38:51 |
Mother's Proxy_(0)
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Excellent story, and an interesting premise. I love the fact that her mom was the one promoting the deal. It makes the taboo all that more intriguing. |