| 2019-09-27 12:41:36 |
Pull Zipper in Case of Emergency
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That was excellent. I'm pleasantly surprised at how good it was. It captured all the emotions between siblings when one is mourning and the other comforts, and then went above and beyond as it added the sensual element of spontaneous, taboo sibling love. Well done! |
| 2020-01-08 13:58:32 |
Stripping for family
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That was brilliant! I loved the erotic mystique behind the story, and the naughty twist that accompanied it all. I look forward to where you take this. |
| 2020-01-13 19:38:03 |
Snowed In With Dad
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Although I felt it was a little rushed, another chapter would be most welcome! I'm very curious to see where this goes. Something tells me that this isn't the only night where these two felt a little desire toward one another. |
| 2020-01-16 14:23:04 |
Don’t tell your Mom
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A fantastic story and, quite frankly, hot as hell! I look forward to me chapters about detailing this daddy-daughter adventure. To say I enjoyed this beginning would be a massive understatement. |
| 2020-02-11 13:41:51 |
Mother's Submission - Chapter 1
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I like how you've begun. The suspense and anticipation is thrilling. I'm excited to read the next chapter. |