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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-06-15 23:30:45 | I Did Knock | Enjoyed, looking forward to the sequal ! You give character to the individuals, use good grammar, etc.. Well developed story line; easy to follow. |
| 2018-06-16 18:02:53 | An Afternoon with Amber | Good Charcter development, ., good story line, well put together. Somewhat suprissed the "swinging/swap" waited so long to take place. Perhaps Part 2 should have revealed the details of the DP of Chloie then the DP of Amber the next day with all 4 in bed together.. I also imagine a week or 2 later, a dinner date which ends up in another swap session sharing one bed together with comments of how "watching and all makes their married relationship so much better. Chloie has already told Mason how hot she gets thinking & seeing he & Amber together. Amber & Harrison should share a privite conversation as how hot & better it is after each swap session. Next would be a conversation between all 4 describing the delights of the "extended love fest". "Lets don't stop" at least on a monthly filng all night long. After 6 months or so, how would it be to somehow bring in a 3rd couple.? Just an idea. |
| 2018-06-16 22:03:24 | Earning Money_(0) | I like it, delightful, no non-sense dealing with a volitle (hot) subject. To me, it would heightened interest with a "blow-by-blow" deion of Keri's first or a unique client. Part 2 maybe dealing with setting up the guys interviews & services. Part 3 dealing with the "romance" between Temple & "Bro" (didn't catch his name[1st person]) |
| 2018-06-17 11:21:19 | The Working Girl Part Two | Enjoyed, tastly written. Was expecting the last 69 to be on the side so each girl could get her share of the last shoot. Looking for to part 3 discussing the law office & her continued need for disccret special attention; still for a fee for the retirement fund. Probably a good way to secure big accounts for the firm. WELL DONE! |
| 2018-06-17 12:31:47 | Katie's Discovery 1 | Believable, hot & tastefully done. Looking forward to Ch 2 or more. In reply to anonymous reader. I once knew a pair of 14 yr old twins that each had a set of D or DD uniquely their sir name was titsworth. For a fact. I would think the pespective of the story is female but a well read male could have written it. Either way, I thought it is well done, even with the C vs DD cups. Hope you get the 10+ views encouraging Pt 2 to post. To really make it hotter for straights & bi's, one or both later show inteest in a guy that turns bi with threesomes & foursomes, daisy chains, etc. |