sexstories.com
Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-07-23 09:25:38 | Pyramid Lake | Ahhh, so our commentators just want Fuckathons so they can wank off. Don't be put off by penis-brains from the trailer parks, losers all. Keep writing, extend your ideas, and please keep away from serial Fuckathons, they are so boring. Makes me happy to see some talent using the English language in a thoughtful manner. |
| 2015-07-23 09:41:50 | From Pyramid Lake to Old Reno | Great descriptive writing, it paints the picture clearly, vivid in the reader's mind. Just be careful of anotomical impossibilities - cunnilingus between two bodies is a bit hard to imagine, let alone perform. |
| 2015-07-31 07:44:00 | The Little Ignorant Slut 2_(1) | Just another Ho-Hum serial Fuckathon; are you guys all focussed on fucking while the Jews make money instead? Can't spend fucks on anything, but you can buy a lot of nice things (and politicians) with money. |
| 2015-07-30 14:32:13 | Hearts and Minds ! | Hmmm, strange but plausible;gungho warrior that rapes children to "save" them. Schizoid personality? Cultural clashed crazy? Whatever. Not a nice guy in my book. Psychotic one-track mind. Redeeming features? Care for the girls he raped. Just how crazy is the author? |
| 2015-07-27 13:12:03 | A Family Betrayal Chapter 35 | More serial Fuckathons, more psychotic and impulsive Heath; Once a good series of stories that has degenerated into absolute crap. Sorry, but I find it very hard to read, find myself skipping so much; yeash, really a waste of time. Please finish it, pack it away and move on. |