| 2018-06-06 04:44:47 |
Turning My Brother Into a Geek!!!
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Pretty hot story but it sounds like English is your second language. An editor would make a huge difference but keep writing regardless! |
| 2020-06-19 23:55:14 |
The Switch 3 - road trip
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This is pretty terrific, I can't wait to read more |
| 2020-08-04 00:39:41 |
The Switch 3 - road trip
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I hate to be a nag, but any guidance on how long until chapter 4 is released? |
| 2020-08-09 09:50:15 |
A Delightful Summer Camp Experience
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Terrific start! Only criticism would be to slow the pacing and extend the sex scenes. |
| 2020-09-12 02:27:24 |
Going Nova ch. 5: The Girls’ Sleepover Begins
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So ridiculously ducking hot! The pacing really paid off. |