| 2015-06-06 02:10:31 |
Dilemma
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Pretty good writing. Can't wait to read more. |
| 2015-06-09 02:11:27 |
Unexpected Changes-My Junior Year Part 1
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A good first story. He went from blushing teenager to take charge stud a little too fast and the sex felt rushed. I think you'r eager oo get beyond vanilla sex and on to part 2 but slowing it down would build the tension. Plus, give us a few details about the fucking, e.g. how tight and wet she was and how she moaned while you struggled to stuff your fat cock into her snug pussy. |
| 2015-06-09 02:16:40 |
Unexpected Changes-My Junior Year Part 2
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Just reading it seems like English might not be your first language. You should find and editor. |
| 2015-08-23 02:02:46 |
Dysfunctional Relations 1_(1)
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You sick bastard! There better be more! |
| 2015-06-14 02:09:07 |
The Second Place Sister: Ch. 10
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Every time I get on the site I check for the next story. |