| 2013-11-16 04:20:53 |
In the closet with my cousin_(0)
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Decent story. Better use of paragraphs would make it much easier to read. |
| 2014-01-07 06:34:04 |
Boyfriend forced to watch me being used
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A really good, sexy story but it's really hurt by a lack of spacing and paragraphing. That makes it really hard to read despite how good a story it is. |
| 2014-11-14 16:57:53 |
Moving On - Chapter 3
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I'm not sure what you're carrying on about puppetmaster. The coercion and domination is implied at best and at some future date. It's not like your virgin eyes have been sullied. |
| 2014-05-06 07:21:22 |
Rape Bait
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Iranians are referred to as Persians, not Arabs. Good story though. |
| 2015-08-22 06:39:22 |
A Couple's Play Day Part 2 - Consequences & Exploration (new edit)
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Great story! Should be rated higher. |