| 2015-06-21 23:21:40 |
Julie's Assault
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It got pretty sexy at the end but the writing was not good. You went from 3rd person to first person and back again; sometimes in the same sentence. Clean up your writing and you'll have a worthy story. |
| 2015-07-01 02:16:52 |
Horny Pregnant Mom
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LOL, I'm sorry but this is like reading a really cheesey porn movie. Did the cable or pizza delivery guy show up at the end? I kinda lost interest. |
| 2015-07-14 02:12:55 |
Mom's Hot Halloween Party Surprise
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How is this at 68%? It's fucking hot! |
| 2015-07-25 01:56:12 |
Fuck buddy seduces son
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Great story |
| 2015-09-15 07:01:26 |
taking it for the team_(1)
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Good story! One thing I'd have expected, however, is for a seasoned swinger to know better than to go ass to pussy. I'm going to check your profile for more stories! |